TV SCRIPT DOCTOR
TESTIMONIALS
I
felt pretty good about my last script when I finished it. But it wasn't
until Sarah read it and gave me notes that I realized just how much better it
could be. She can identify a larger problem with your entire act as well
as identify smaller ways to manipulate the individual scenes the make them
funnier, clearer and more compelling. I won't send anything to my agent
until after I've received and implemented Sarah's feedback.
Jennifer
Keene
ABC/Disney
Writing Fellow
Staff
Writer
ACCORDING TO JIM
PHINEAS AND FERB
Getting feedback from Sarah on my scripts
has been invaluable. She's honest, fair and helpful. Most people
forget about the helpful part. I'd recommend her to anyone looking to
bring their material up a notch.
Robert Dean Klein
Screenwriter
LITTLE FISH STRANGE POND
I have worked with Sarah McLaughlin, The TV Script Doctor, for years. We wrote
on the staff of "That '70s Show," and then on my own ABC Sitcom staff
where I made her one of my first hires. She has often come to my rescue in the
lonely black hole that is developing your own show alone. Whether I'm stuck on
story, need help breaking an outline, finding my characters, or I'm in the
final stages of my script and need jokes, Sarah's energy and talent make her my
one of my first go-to girls.
Kristin Newman
Executive Producer
CHUCK
HOW I MET YOUR MOTHER
THAT 70s SHOW
Whenever
I have a new script I make sure to get Sarah to read it. Her feedback,
insight, and always positive attitude are an invaluable tool in making my
writing stronger.
Alan
Dybner
Executive
Story Editor
THAT 70S SHOW